has hosted an event that I very much look forward to. It's called the Vampire's Day Soiree and it always takes place on Valentine's Day as an alternative for those of us with a darker outlook on things. Besides, what could possibly be more romantic than an encounter with the right vampire? No doubt, vampires are dangerous, blood-thirsty creatures, but they are also sensual and romantic. This year marks the fifth annual celebration of this special event.
All a person has to do to participate is to sign up and place a link to his/her own blog on the Ms. Holly's website,
add the photo on the left to your blog, link back to her site and post something about vampires. It's that simple--and it's fun!
Since vampires often make appearances in my fiction, I enjoy taking a special scene from one of my stories and putting it up here for everyone to enjoy. I know, it's a bit of shameless promotion on my part, but an aspiring author needs to find exposure somewhere. This time, I am taking a scene from a story I finished back in the fall. It's a somewhat Lovecraftian piece and it takes place in and under an abandoned railroad tunnel on the East Side of Providence, Rhode Island; H.P. Lovecraft's old stomping grounds. The name of the story is Horror in the Tunnel. As yet, it remains unpublished, but that's because I haven't decided just what I want to do with it. That said, I hope you'll enjoy my offering for this year's event:
My
thoughts are interrupted by s spine-curdling scream. It's a woman's
voice; possibly the source of the screams I heard earlier. I stand
almost spellbound as I watch two of the ghoulish creatures leading a
hysterical, naked woman to the central slab. Without hesitation, they
force the struggling woman onto the central stone face up and set
about chaining her limbs tightly to the stone's extremities.
I
stare in amazement, wondering if I have stumbled upon some secret
BDSM ritual. Yet, how could that be, as these repulsive creatures
before me appear as real as anything I've ever seen. And the victim
is clearly frightened, struggling.
Suddenly,
the stately woman arises from her throne and for a moment, the
drumming stops and an eerie silence falls over the cavern—a silence
that is only broken by the captive's pleadings. “Please let me go.
Please!”
As
the woman in black takes her first steps toward the terrified female,
the beating of the drums begins anew. This time, the rhythm is
agonizingly slow as hands and sticks strike the instruments in unison
once every three seconds or so. The sound echos throughout the
chamber like some sort of death march as the obvious leader of the
assembly walks toward the terrified person lying before her.
The
drumming ceases when she reaches the panic-stricken prisoner. The
woman looks down at the young lady affectionately as she gently
brushes back her hair and strokes her face. The girl is whimpering
amid hysterical cries. “Please, please!”
I
realize that something sinister is happening here as I contemplate
the possibilities. Clearly, this is no consensual ritual; at least,
not as far as the woman on the rock is concerned. Yet, I feel a
certain excitement when the lady in black bends over and whispers
something in the girl's ear. I watch in amazement as she begins
moving her lips slowly and sensually along the captive's neck. Before
long, she ceases her movement and lets her lips linger, kissing her
victim passionately. The affectionate attentions of the woman in
black seem to calm the young woman down as she begins moaning
ecstatically, offering her neck to her captor's passionate caresses.
I find the scene before me both unnerving and yet, exciting, as my
mind fills with conflicting feelings of guilt and arousal.
The
sinister woman's ministrations continue for several minutes until
finally she backs away from the now still form lying below her. A
crimson liquid covers part of her face and runs in streams from her
mouth until she wipes it away with a hand, which she in turn, licks
hungrily.
Oh
my God! She bit her. She tore open the flesh of that poor girl and
drank her blood! What the hell's going on here?
Without
warning, the slow drumbeat commences once again as the first of the
ghoulish creatures, which had led the young victim to the stone,
steps before her limp body. The second hands him a colorful but
folded and elongated piece of cloth. He at first, holds it above his
head for all to see. Then, he carefully places the fabric on the
stone next to the young woman's body, where he begins unfolding it.
Within moments the content of the package is revealed as he lifts a
fearsome looking dagger above his head. The assembly roars in
approval, but the sounds emanating forth form a chorus of ghastly,
ungodly moans--sounds capable of making the bravest man's blood run
cold.
The
chamber becomes quiet once again as the creature lowers the knife
toward the young woman's body. Although my body is almost stiff with
fear, I cannot stand by watching this spectacle any longer, and I
react without thinking of the consequences.
“No,
no! Get away from her you bastards!”
My
hand reaches into my coat pocket and within a matter of nanoseconds,
my weapon is out and I aim it at the creature with the dagger. Two
shots ring out in rapid succession. The ghoulish thing drops the
dagger and reaches for what must have been a wound in its left arm
while the rest of the assembly seems caught off guard. All heads turn
in my direction as I struggle to take control of the situation by
shouting at the gruesome beings once again.
“Get
away from her!”
Once again, here's a link to Holly's Horrorland.
Holy cliffhanger, Batman!!! Fabulously Lovecraftian indeed!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Emma! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteAhhhh, and next.... What next.... So many questions.... So delicious.... Tantalising like an entrée before a main meal :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the critique. If nothing else, "Horror in the Tunnel" will appear in my next ebook and eventually, my next paperback. I'll certainly make an announcement here when that happens. Thanks for visiting!
DeleteOoh what fiendish goings on to wet the appetite but what happens next? You've now got a captive audience who wait with baited breath for the next installment.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it. As I mentioned in a previous reply, the full story will eventually end up in my next ebook; and later, in a paperback. When that happens, I'll announce it here. Thanks for visiting.
DeleteNoooooooo, I can't stand it! Leaving us all hanging like that, Nightwind ... it's cruel. So how long do we have to wait for the ebook then? :)
ReplyDeleteMy idea is to do smaller ebooks and to put those out much more frequently than I was able to manage with the paperback. After about three ebooks a full paperback will follow. I'm currently working on a story, which I should get finished soon. I have three others ready to go and I'd like to write one more. After that, I'll probably create the ebook.
DeleteWatch for an email from me, Insomniac. I'll contact you soon.
Next??? What is next??? Excellent! Brilliant writing! Kept me going! I will have to keep in touch, as to when the paperback will be out!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Magic Love Crow! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteWait, what happens?!?! ARRRGGGHHHH!
ReplyDeleteHappy Vampire's Day!
And a Happy Vampire's Day to you as well, Goth Gardener! The story will probably make its way into an ebook reasonably soon. I'll announce it here when it does. Thanks for visiting!
DeleteGreat! I'll be on the lookout.
DeleteThere is no shame in promoting yumminess. Leaving us hanging, on the other hand, shame on you! *giggles*
ReplyDeleteHappy Vampire's Day Soirée! ♥
I'm sorry! The story should be available before too long.
DeleteClassic gothic horror...loved it :D XXX
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteMore, more, MORE…. I must get your book when it comes out. As I read this I imaged it happening at a place called The Druids Temple, which I visited a while back. http://appythegardener.blogspot.co.uk/2015/04/druids-temple-north-yorkshire-2.html
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it, App'y. I'm almost feeling guilty now about using it, since so many want to read the conclusion. After looking at the photos you provided of the Druid's Temple, I can see why my story invoked images of such a place. I'm glad that it had that effect.
DeleteWhether "Horror in the Tunnel" ends up in an ebook or in some other publication, I'll announce it here. Nice hearing from you!
Never regret anything the made people happy. And don`t feel guilty about promoting anything that you do.
DeleteThanks for the sage advice, App'y! I needed that.
DeleteThanks so much for the flattering, excellent description of the Vampire's Day Soiree! May I quote you in my post next year?
ReplyDeleteAdd me to the lists of folks anxiously awaiting your ebook too!
Of course you can quote me next year, Holly! I'm glad that I was able to do your event justice.
DeleteAnd yep! You've been added to the list. Thanks for visiting!
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